Tuesday, July 28, 2009

Guiding Questions for Feedback

- Of the four pieces included (essay of place, character sketch, extended metaphor poem, and persuasive essay), which did you like the most and why?
The extended metaphor poem was my favourite, because I love the style of the poem and I really enjoyed when I was writing it

- Which of the four pieces had the strongest connection to the quotation? What made the connection do strong?
The persuasive essay had the strongest connection to the quotation. Since the persuasive essay was discussing the quotation, it had the connection directly, which other ones don’t.

- What suggestions do you have for the author?
The author should talk less about the religious things and use less allusion to the religions. Because most of the people are not every good with religions, too much allusion to religions will create difficulties for readers to understand.

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